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by John Meils
Back in the hotel room at the end of the night, I caught Lorri staring in the mirror at herself. “You know,” she said, fingering the hemline of her bridesmaid dress, “I might want this at some point.”
“I know,” I said, as it occurred to me that I might want it too—but with her only.
“If it weren’t for the cost,” she added, the dress falling from her shoulders to the floor. “What a waste.”
And like a snap from a hypnotist I returned, only slightly worse for wear.
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1 Green Angel // Jun 19, 2008 at 3:39 pm
John, you’re an excellent writer and I enjoyed your piece. Though you claim to have “anti-marriage views”, your piece was an open love letter to your girlfriend, “Lorri”, and practically a proposal (or at least a hint of one).
Your ending needed a “record scratching” sound effect.